by moonrakers69
Wooden writing.
Didn't you ever get to compound sentences in university? Did you really ever get to university?
So boring and as as erotic as watching paint dry.
Thanks for the feedback :) Maybe next time you could be less weak and actually stand by what you say instead of hiding behind anonymity.
Also, you incorrectly used 'as' twice in the final sentence.
Did you even go to University? Proof reading's kind of a big deal there :)
Much Love