by monamante
Can't wait for the next part!! :D I love your stories. Hope you never stop writing!!
After reading this exciting and drama filled story. You are brilliant and I am eagerly awaiting the next part. Keep up the awesome work and thank you for sharing.
IDB.
My heads spinning with that last page. I was all like yay they're finally together then WHAM no more kitty and santa and now kitty is running and hiding a big secret. I cant wait for the next ch to come out, i desprately need some answers.
Ps this is my fav story on here :)
This is an awesome story last page big shocker. Can't wait for part 3. Please don't take long.
Great storyline!!! Love where you have taken this story. Can't wait till next chapter!
Man this had to be one of the most exciting stories I've ever read!!!!!! Like no joke I Did not see that twist at the end coming I mean first Santana wants nothing to do with her soon to be ex wife now she doubts Tiff and tells her she's fucking crazy?? Man I can't wait to read the next part please please please continue!!!!
This story is so wonderfully written. I love how the storyline has been progressing so far. You've captivated me. I can't wait to see what happens next!
Thank you for the wonderful journey you are taking us on. I cannot wait to see how this ends up. I spent most of the day in bed enjoying the twist and turns... You can read into that if you want to. Take care and keep up the writing!
OMG This story is amazing and I can't wait for more...please don't make us wait long!! It is so well written and definitely keeps you on the edge of your seat while at the same time squirm in your seat at the sexy parts. Please hurry with the next installment.
next chapter soon please!!! can`t resist on getting hooked with this story.thanks monamante(cinder)
Maybe Santa knew that the room was bugged or saw a shadow looming by the door, so in order to throw the person off she made it seem like she didn't believe Kitty. Knowing that Kitty will be like "fuck this shit", Santa allowed her to sneak and get away to protect her from harm and figure out how to take the crazy ex down. Which would then lead to the emotional reconciliation of Kitty and Santa. BOOM! I am going to believe this reasoning because Santa is on something else.
just couldn't believe i was reading your story not seeing the characters play.
you're an awesome writer!
please write more n more!!
For the love of God. Write the third chapter. Its very well written and I'm hooked.
Fucking fantastic! This is my favourite of your stories! Thank you so damn much for sharing your awesome stories for free! You are a brilliant writer! I can actually wait for chapter three as long as you promise it'll be as brilliant! Haha!
(Yes, I love to use exclamation marks. Lol).
I looovvve this story, nice twist. I just hate how you stop when the story is getting so juicy. Please hurry and submit the third instalment.
This is great :D I love it want to know what happens ! I've looked on here everyday for the past 2 weeks ! Please I love it so much I do !
Okay, I have been checking for the next chapter often. Hurry up! Not that I want you to rush... or do I? So confused!
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I'm sorry it has taken so long but I promise to make it up to you with a quick chapter 4 addition. It'll be up as soon as it is edited. Thanks for the love.
Gosh I love this story. I made no mistakes clicking on it.
But I definitely suspected Jane for the exact same reasons as Tiff.
Anyway, off to continue reading. On chapter three :D
Write a book. It would become a best seller, no doubt in my mind.
I'm enjoying this story and I've given you five stars for Chapter 2. However, I must say that Santa's abrupt change of heart and attitude towards Jane in the final few paragraphs just does not ring true. This is someone Santa loathes and yet she straightaway turns on Tiff, calling her insane, and rants about what a good person Jane is. Sorry, but Santa's reaction in this passage is out-of-character and just implausible.
Girl I’m missing work to read this.I suspected Jane too ..kill the b next chp please