All Comments on 'A Knight and her Unruly Slave Ch. 02'

This story is proving interesting, to what extent will Judoc continue to challenge Herleva?

And to what extent will Herleva endure the challenges of Judoc?

Will they eventually become equals? Or even in husband and wife?

5 * for you.

I apologize for my English (yet and forever), isn't my native language.

Title says enough. Good story. Keep up good work.

You still need to take care of those tenses, but otherwise a pretty good read. Great job on the dialogues and the dynamics between the characters. Keep it up!

(note: summer is an extremely busy season for farmers)

I hope you will continue this awesome story soon! Both Judoc and Herleva are engaging characters and their back and forth (both physically and verbally) is very enjoyable. Your story has a lot of potential for some interesting developments and I hope you plan to continue it until the end. Happy writing, dude!

Oddly sweet, in a messed-up sort of way. Looking forward to more of these two! <3

Great so far thanks