All Comments on 'A Knock on the Door Ch. 01'

The story was okay, aside from some sloppy writing errors, but it struck a familiar chord and I experienced a sort of Deja Vu as I read further. I'm positive I've read this story before, so the question is: Did you write the original, and this is a repost, or are you trying to take credit for someone else's work?

Definitely not taking credit for someone else's work.

I closed an older account and have been posting a mix of new and older stories as PT Winters.

Thought I had corrected/updated the story for errors but apparently not. Will endeavour to do a better job editing moving forward.

Definitely post the other chapters

Good i would like to read the rest of the chapters

I very much would like to read the mext two chapters.

Gotta love a tale that starts with a bang, you definitely did a good thing here.

Please post the next chapters as soon as you can.

5/5

Please post the rest of the story, does he bang the daughter ???

To bad this is not real life instead of fiction as I myself have a large problem & when I find a female who can handle my member I try to keep in touch with her for future dry spells.! Good little story & looking forward to hearing about who - where - & when in the future.* lol '5'<

Nice start, seems like another story on site. Keep it cumming.

Let's read more, it is very erotic, thank you.

Loved it. Hopefully mom/daughter threesome in chapter 2.

"Loved it. Hopefully mom/daughter threesome in chapter 2."

NO!!!

Guy & Mom only....

I haven't the seen "other story" amongst the thousands on this web side, so please just keep writing. I love this tale. Thank you.

Similar to another story that I have read but the other story ended after chapter 1.

I look forward to reading the 2 remaining chapters.

hope the daughter joins in for a 3 some

I can't believe the sheer number of comments this story has generated already.

First of all, my apologies for not be very clear in the story itself. This is a repost of a story had I posted under a different account. I've decided to try my hand at writing professionally, so I deleted that account, found a better Pen Name and now I post a combination of new and old stuff under PT Winters.

Everything I post have I written myself. Every word, for good or bad.

I'll do a better job of identifying older stories from now on.

Not sure when I'll be able to post the rest of the story, given I am selling several elsewhere, but if anyone wants a review copy of the completed thing, I'm happy to e-mail it out to you. Just use the Send Feedback tab and let me know. (I try to read comments regularly, but I can't promise I won't miss some)

Bring on chapters 2, 3, 4 whatever. Keep 'em coming.

can't waiter the next chapter.

I really enjoyed this. Please continue to post. Thanks.

Please continue

Please finish this and let it be the start of a, no pun intended, long series

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I had to really think about what was going through all of their minds as a daughter sees her mother in that position. Please give us the juicy details of what transpires next. It would help if you'd clean up the spelling and grammar.

Very, very hot! I hope you continue this story! Thank you!

This has to be one of the hottest stories i have read in a very long time!!!...couldn't help but masturbate to it myself....can't wait to read the next 2 chapters!!

This is an old story. Are you reposting this or plagiarizing it?

Of the twenty five comments on this story, seven are pointing out that it is a re-post. There is also one comment from the author explaining why it is a re-post.

Every time I look at the list of new Public Comments, there's another one. Do these people not read other people's comments, or do they just drop a comment and run?

Lue

yes

I've learned two things here,

1 be very, very clear when I repost a story

2 literotica fans are very protective of authors. It's nice to know if someone ever did post one of my stories they would be called out on it repeatedly.

:)

Where are the subsequent Chapters you spoke about??

Post the rest please.

Andy, Mom, oh Claire your home can you get me a towel Andy was just showing me...

Yes I would like to read more. Of course I wood never get in this kind of perdickherment, o to be so lucky. Are boys so shy ? I think I'm jumping all over that, 36 why a lovely young lady home alone tonight.

YES !!!!! I want more of their adventure.

Keep writing would love a chapter 2. Thanks for sharing.

I can't wait to read the next 2 chapters.

The smart thing would be a disclaimer to explain that it is a re-post at the beginning, before the actual story starts.

If you do that then you won't have one out of every five comments accusing you of plagiarizing yourself.

I wonder how many older women have this as there fantasy especially if they have only had small or medium size. Cocks

Great story,,would love to hear more

i love ynger

Continue the story, maybe he gets to fuck her?

Loved it.....Andy needs to start becoming a man about the neighborhood

Excellent story. Please continue it. The cliff hanger is a great touch...

Great start and great writing, but I'm looking for a nice cum, right now, not weeks from now. I prefer full fucking to interrupted encounters. Seems like multi-part writers like to toy with readers, but I'm not one that's interested in playing along in that way. Good luck to you. P.S. Nice to see a non-incest story on Literotica, they seem rare these days. Although now that the daughter has arrived I guess part 2+ will fall back into the same category as most everything here.

Sorry to read you don't like the the multi chapter set up. You point is well taken, though I will say that's just how my mind temds to work, I think in sexual encounters and write each one as if it was a stand alone short. I'm not intentionally toying with my readers. That said, if it doesn't work for you, than it doesn't work for you.

As for the incest angle. Scan my story titles, you'll see the categories of each one there. I haven't written a single incest story and have no intention of it. Just cause a story seems to going in one direction, doesn't mean it's going to!

...looking forward to the other chapters. Well done.

Love to read the next 2!! What did the daughter do?

I loved this short story and would love the next 2 please

Among other things, I'm curious to know why Andy said that Claire could vouch for him.

I would like to read the rest.

a very good read please continue

What beautiful pacing and staging. And the end is a delightful twist. The poor boy is going to spend the rest of his life both regretting it and trying to create a moment half as good. Bravo!

Oh yes two more please

Wish I was that kid!!!

Such a hot story and so well written. My wife is a regular story reader on Literotica so I will definitely be recommending this story to her, as it's her two favourite things, big cock and a young stud. Got me very excited, and I''m definitely no young stud, which is the sign of a top story. Thank you!

what a superb build up, please continue with more of this highly erotic story!

It's been six months, PT. Please tell me the next chapter is being proofed?

Thanks.

Bluejacket01

Nice start with the mom getting caught up & then pushing the situation. Looking forward to the next chapters.

More....more more....more. more. more. more. more. thanks

Will we see the follow up chapters of this Hall of Fame story? More please...

Since I posted this story, I've actually starting selling some of my stuff (out of necessity, not greed) so I don't know when or even if I'll post the rest here.

Now you people (literotica readers) have been very, VERY kind to me, so I'm not about to try to take advantage of that. I'm a smut writer, but I try to be a classy smut writer.

If anyone emails me via the send feedback tab, I'll send you a review copy of the complete story. (I'm hoping you'll give me an honest review in exchange for it, but really, that's up to you)

I am trying to strike a better balance of sharing free stuff here and selling some stuff online, so even if this story doesn't continue here, hopefully you'll find other stuff you like.

Thanks for all the kind words, I do read all the feedback I get.

for those that want to read what happens next....

https://www.amazon.com/dp/B01DEEY7NE

Amazing story dirty filthy whore cant wait too see what install for claire

this is a teenage boy's dream come true.

Paleaseeee

Would love to read the remaining chapters

If you want to read the rest, I need to know where to send it to you.

If you're wary of giving out your email (I won't share it with anyone, but I appreciate some people are wary of such things), check out my Amazon page to purchase it

Brilliant hot story lots more please.....nerds fucking milfs or shy boys fucking milfs

Where are the other chapters?

Ask PTWinters for the next chapter, so hot! 5*s for sure!

more

Send the next chapter. Would love to read more.

Yes… more please!

more please....