All Comments on 'A Land Far, Far Away Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Loved it

I'm really enjoying the journey these two characters are taking me on. Keep up the good work.

mrskelleymrskelleyabout 16 years ago
Great Update

Loving these two....her mother is so ignorant!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
GREAT STORY

Again WOW, it appears all serious discussions happen in the bathroom...what her mother said to her was so wrong...no wonder she is having a difficult time being in a relationship with him when her mother is such a bigot. As for Daniel he seems to really like her as much as she likes him. The ending wasa surprise I can't wait to read what happens next. Please update soon. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Please update soon

Please update soon...Ireally like this story. So what happens next for the young lovers and whats up with the ranger?

Yobo36Yobo36over 10 years ago
Sweet & Funny

One of the best "series" of stories. I loved every bit of it. Funny. Creative. Sexy and EROTIC play between them. Thank you.

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