All Comments on 'A Landscaper's Debt Ch. 01'

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LarryInSeattleLarryInSeattleover 7 years ago
Brad or Jack?

You called him Jack on at least one occasion. Funny, I never thought I'd ever say there was too much description of detailed sex but here I am saying it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
An absolutely delicious story!

Terrific scene setting. Lovely buildup. Nice sex -- even though a bit hard to follow who was doing what to whom at times. Don't understand why not rated much higher. I gave it 5 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Confusing

Booker became Bolivar and Brad became Jack.

Please read before posting.

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Words can be erotic, touching the deep desires hidden inside each of us, bringing about a mutual pleasure for the one who writes the adventure and for the one who reads the story. Do you want to explore the erotic side of your nature? If so, drop me a line.

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