All Comments on 'A Last Summer Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Good story so far

Looks like he will be fucking Julie and sis soon,. so hot

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Great until the last paragraph kind of went goofy.

MattthereaderMattthereaderalmost 8 years ago
Plot!?

hope there's more coming and i liked the plot twist at the end

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Great ending .... Julie had a surprise for both of them and they had been setup ..... looks like she wants them both before college starts and so they know about sex too !! Sneaky but great, We certainly have to have another chapter quickly as we can hardly contain ourselves now. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Mmm, wasn't sure where this was going and nearly gave up on it.

When it part 2 coming?

I can't wait now.

prop69prop69almost 8 years ago
Hurry for Chapter 2, my cock is hard

Can't wait to see what Julie is going to add

scotlytscotlytalmost 8 years ago
Great start for a 1st Chapter

I can't wait to read more.

woodhandonsillwoodhandonsillover 6 years ago

This was fantastically written and held me in an erotic buzz the entire time despite nothing sexual actually happening. Are you writing more to this series still?

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