All Comments on 'A Legal Affair'

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CookieCutterCookieCutterover 16 years ago
sweet!

calls for a sequel

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Nice

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No, it doesn't really need to be continued. (Unless you're already at work on it...?)

cheesy80scheesy80sover 16 years ago
Nice descriptions

I enjoyed their tryst. I was descriptive to allow the reader to share in their pleasure.

Quite good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Very Hot..........

Great story....please write more....

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
not bad

Good images. Some verb tense disagreement, something an editor could help you with. Keep writing!

hammer17hammer17over 16 years ago
Very Hot

now we need more of Amy and Lisa.....

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