by AngelkissNkill
Love it! Please keep writing! I need to know what happens next!
Rude Much? and thats directed to the anonymous commenter, why don't you write your own damn story if you want to leave unnecessary/useless comments.
i really like this story, i'm a little confused about the connection between Spencer and Tristan.
Great start..
Only wish this 1st chapter was MUCH longer.
Thanks
Start to your story. I would suggest longer chapters and to check some of your wording and spelling.
Good job please don't keep us waiting long for the next chapter.
Cheers
I agree with most comments about this being a great story with Tristan and Spence. I take it that Spence is a werewolf and Tristan is his mate, I got this from the "spark" between them. Please post the next chapter and make it just a tad longer than this one. Thank you!
This is a really good start. Is Rick supposed to be her witness protection person or what. Will Spence be able to protect her and will she finally tell him who she is and what she is hiding from.
It needs more this is a very good beginning, but that's what it is a beginning.
great start, enjoyed what i've read so far.
so when is the rest of the story going to appear?