All Comments on 'A Lesson in Humility'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Don't write what you don't know

This was awful from a legal point of view. They should have gone to Court. In the end Sarah would have have gotten creamed. Stupid story. Even for fiction it was just ludicrous.

JadestoyJadestoyabout 7 years ago
Interesting

I found it a interesting take on revenge

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Different

Not the usual story line

SARAHHOPESARAHHOPEabout 7 years ago
Disturbing

While creativity is always wonderful in fiction writings, this story disturbed me because it seems to echo the premise that the wrongs occurred are made whole by humiliating someone by cutting off their hair. I suppose I am a sucker for a happy ending but wouldn't it be wonderful if Lisa kept her hair and the tormenting stopped all together? I

Good writing. I like stories that make me think.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Boring and "hilarious"

I really like forced headshave stories but this is one is plain stupid, I know it's fiction but you ad to much detail to legal to make it seem "realistic" and it ended up being stupid.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
love it

please ad more

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