All Comments on 'A Lesson in Imprisonment Ch. 01'

... that makes a pretty heady mixture! A nice start to what I think will be a great story. Thank you for sharing your talent with us, Storysmyth - I hope there wil;l be more to this very soon. Five out of five for this gem!

Congratulations on a well constructed and believable piece. (The story not Ms. Jennings)

Just as I was getting into, I have to wait,humph

A well thoght out forst chapter can't wait for the next.

exciting start, well written - but, sadly, no sequel

:-(

Simon

Well, too bad this hot story was not continued. It was really well written and showed someone that was scared due to being imprisoned through a setup. Would have liked to see her being processed in the prison and at the end get some revenge on the student that set her up as well as the school leadership.