All Comments on 'A Lesson in Punctuality'

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MastersallMastersallalmost 18 years ago
Excellent !

What a hot tale. ... do hope this is only the beginning of a

very hot series... bravo!

MCRLUCYMCRLUCYalmost 15 years ago
Does the job.

Let's just say that this story certainly does the job. Other than that, it's extremely well written and your use of language and grammar is perfect. Reads very quickly; it's just a shame it had to end.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
She shouldn't have bothered

to go at all. Leave the 2 little tops to play with themselves.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
uh, no.

Tardiness just an excuse for ugliness by people who do not care. Not dom/mes worth submitting to. Non erotic. -1*

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