by litany
What a hot tale. ... do hope this is only the beginning of a
very hot series... bravo!
Let's just say that this story certainly does the job. Other than that, it's extremely well written and your use of language and grammar is perfect. Reads very quickly; it's just a shame it had to end.
to go at all. Leave the 2 little tops to play with themselves.
Tardiness just an excuse for ugliness by people who do not care. Not dom/mes worth submitting to. Non erotic. -1*