All Comments on 'A Life as a Royal Breeding Slave'

It's a bit short but has promise as a series. At least, your English is good. It was well written enough that, at first, I thought the victim was a woman which tells me you did well.

Keep writing and ignore the trolls.

Thank you for you kind words of encouragement and advice. As to the length of the story I suppose that two factors came into account. Firstly, I had obviously misread the Literotica publishing guidelines. Secondly, and possibly the more pertinent reason was that I was almost in too much of a hurry to publish my first piece, thus realising a life long goal. I felt a little like a kid on Christmas morning that Santa had forgotten, every time I checked to see if I had made “the grade” and my tale was published, only to find the word “pending” in my status box. I am well into my second chapter and I’m pleased to say that it has evolve into a far longer piece.

Good start!

Mars Needs Men?

They kill all the women and capture the men... how about putting this in Erotic Horror. I expect that to be awful. In Sci-Fi and Fantasy we can hope for something a bit better.

Would love to see more.