All Comments on 'A Little Bit of Give and Take'

by Mareus

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Loved it

Great story, I liked the progression and the ideas you put into it. Keep it up! Lets have a sequel too.

SindaSindaalmost 17 years ago
Fabulous!

Very, very sexy! Usually don't like these kind of stories, but I may have just been converted.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
this is hot

reminds me of when my x and palyed cards and smoked after a but i'll go to the bedroom get her panties and pantyhose and put then on withou her knowin mmmmmmmmm

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
holy smokes

way sexy, i would love to play such games with my wife!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
4/5

Good story, well written, very few grammatical errors & I bought into the relationship.

Two things prevented a 5 star rating. Firstly, the use of the phrase "panty-boy" which is almost as bad as the dreaded "S" word.

Secondly, the distribution of challenges seemed so unfair. He got anally raped, had to drink urine (& far more than he had agreed to), suck cock & eat cream pie. She had to masturbate; big deal. She also enjoyed hurting him, smiling as she did it.

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