by milfleglover
As normal, another great story, more hot sex and another beautiful older woman
Long may it continue :)
You ruined a perfectly good story with a misguided attempt to be descriptive. Rather than describe a beautiful, elegant, mature woman and let the readers' imagination fill in the blanks, you described an ugly, bony, crooked, piece of roadkill. Women change as they age, but the good ones don't look like old turkeys.
You got 1 star. Zero wasn't an option.
I enjoyed the story for many reasons. I even got a laugh at some anonymous jerk's comments. I'd give you an extra point but it doesn't allow me.
...the multiple descriptions of her wattle, thankyouverymuch.
Very nice. Love the narrative. Very well written, very sexy. From both viewpoints. :) Keep the hits cummin' :)