by TNCircusFreak
really enjoyed that, built up to a wonderful climax, very detailed
It should have been, you don't leave your keys in your car no matter how nice the neighborhood appears.
so descriptive and well written. I feel like I knew the characters and really cared about them. was initially sad, because o thought the milk was the "wet and messy" part, but was really excited when the action moved to the bathroom. well done.