All Comments on 'A Little Friendly Advice'

One of the best 'friends' story I've read yet! I can't wait for more on this!!!

Love how you actually did a bit of character developement on these two, instead of going straight for the (Oh-God!) The nicest thing about this tale is they seem to genuinely care about each other. Yes, that makes the place they are headed HOT-HOT-HOT!! :) Please Sir, may we have another?

please continue......

Please continue. I can imagine a couple of friends I would certainly like to get better aquainted with the way these two did.

The moments and the problems sound very realistic.

Enjoyed story, hopefully she won't break his heart.

This is a very nice story - keep it coming.

Why the hell are you making us waiting ?

Is you PC out ?

Please, buy a new one to continu......

I love two friends finding love...

Really? Good up where he kept repeating the same line. Quit reading before end of first page. Sorry, little tolerance for stupidity. Like your other works.

Hey all. I realize now I might be getting some new eyes on my old work given the popularity of my most recent story.

Just want to say I wrote this a decade ago, when I was a MUCH shittier writer. I've left it up because I know there are some people who liked this piece but it's definitely not a good showcase of my current abilities.

Thanks for the support on "My Cousin, My Escort." I am hoping to follow it up soon with a new story and can only hope my future work matches the quality some are hoping to see going forward.

Needs a bit more inner dialogue.

I get that you're trying to show his reluctance about taking the next step, maybe messing up the existing relationship, but this is more analysis on my part where it should be more description on your part.

Other than that, good beginning.

Good story. Too short.