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Click here"Give me every last drop," she said.
I felt her hands milking me, coaxing every bit of cum they could get. Where it was going was anyone's guess.
As I felt my member slowly starting to shrink, I watched her intently. She took her lips off my dick and swallowed, something I had never seen before (in real life anyway).
"Oh, that was hot," she said.
Amber licked her lips and sat back on the couch as I tried to figure out what the hell just happened.
"Jesus, that felt so good," I replied.
"Really?" she asked. "I've always wondered if I was too slutty while giving head. I mean, the whole eyes things, the dirty talk."
"No, it worked," I said. "That was the best blowjob I've ever gotten."
"Thanks," she said.
"But seriously, what the heck was that for?"
"Well, I just wanted to see what you thought of how I gave head and, plus, seems like you got your confidence back."
"I guess so," I said. "So, what now?"
"I suppose it's your turn to ask for advice." She said.
"What do you mean?" I asked.
"You said you wondered if you were pleasing Ashley right?" she asked. "Well, if you want, I could critique you."
"You mean we'd have sex?" I asked, still dumbfounded.
"No, it's not sex," she said. "Think of it as a practice run."
With that, Amber got up, took her shirt and bra off and started unbuckling her jeans while heading to my bedroom.
"So, do you want my help or not?" she asked.
To be continued (maybe)...
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- COMMENTS
Moralez18PTover 3 years agoNeeds a bit more inner dialogue.
I get that you're trying to show his reluctance about taking the next step, maybe messing up the existing relationship, but this is more analysis on my part where it should be more description on your part.
Other than that, good beginning.
Thongluver69almost 4 years agoAuthorHey all. I realize now I might be getting some new eyes on my old work given the popularity of my most recent story.
Just want to say I wrote this a decade ago, when I was a MUCH shittier writer. I've left it up because I know there are some people who liked this piece but it's definitely not a good showcase of my current abilities.
Thanks for the support on "My Cousin, My Escort." I am hoping to follow it up soon with a new story and can only hope my future work matches the quality some are hoping to see going forward.
IaOldTimeralmost 4 years agoReally? Good up where he kept repeating the same line. Quit reading before end of first page. Sorry, little tolerance for stupidity. Like your other works.
