All Comments on 'A Live Show Pt. 01'

The score for this is 1 tops as the spelling needs serious revision. An international dictionary and use of spelling for words contained in it would improve the story and get more readers. As around 90% of the world stop putting a 'u' in words that should be end in 'or' like "color", or double 'll' when a single is needed, then there's the constant ending of words in 'ise' that are 'ize.'

Keep that one going. Got nice and hard..........and...........the story ended!

Re the commentator from Hicksville USA, your spelling was first class. You even spelt arse correctly - so many contributors confuse bums with donkeys.

Keep it up. The civilised world appreciates your work.

Great story and just waiting for more.