All Comments on 'A Long Day at Work'

Well done for a first submission. I am interested to see if you can build on characters and storyline in additional chapters.

This was Chapter 1, right?

You're on a role. Wouldn't mind if you kept it going

Great story and talk about a total fantasy, wife's best friend but anal as well. Hope this is just chapter one, this story is begging for a Lexi and Emmy portion in it somewhere. For you as an author in general with this as your first submission I can't wait to see what else you will write.

Really enjoyable first story. A great effort and I'm already looking forward to seeing where you go with these characters.

One very small point, tights are the same as pantyhose and don't use a garter belt which is for stockings.

Outstanding story — looking forward to part two!