All Comments on 'A Long Journey To My Brother'

A masterpiece

An exotic story told with such skill that it seemed both natural and loving.

Good story. Look forward to the next part.

Loved this story. Need more. Wish Taylor was my sister.

Very well written. Good one.

well written. please write more

Very good work here, definitely something original. I hope you'll keep writing.

WoW!!WoW!!WoW!! Excellent writing. And so welcome to be able to read a submission from someone with an ability to use language well. Erotic to the core without a trace of the puerile smut that gets served far too often. Many, many thanks.

i want to be the third wheel and lick up our messes

That was so nice, PLEASE add more.

I don't usually comment on stories here, but FUCK Cassie. Hope that bitch finds herself under a bridge.