All Comments on 'A Long Time Coming'

mmm very hot great story

Hiya Lin. This was a great story. It was so easy to fall in love with Kayla and Linda. Great characters. Then on top of great, lovable characters the sex was out of this world. Great job, thanks for the fantastic story.

Lin,

I did not realize until today that you are an author as well as a reader. Excellent! I enjoyed your story. It was hot and heavy and got right into the action.

Keep up the good work!

Wax Philosophic

birddog22 - Thank you so much for your kind words.

litfan10 - As you can tell, it's my first attempt at writing, and reads as such. Thank you for taking the time to read this and comment. Also thanks for all the fine work you give to us through Literotica. Your "Deal" world is one I'd love to live in.

WaxPhilosophic - I'm not sure I would call myself an author as much as someone trying to get her story out there. Can't for the life of me figure out why I changed our names. Thank you for sharing your work with us. Your characters are amazing.

No story just word porn.