by kittys_katt
Please make a part 2! This was amazing! I love this! I need a part 2!
I handled it with as much tact and grace as it was given..maybe u should consider ur words and there impact before commenting..just a thought..
A nice bite-sized morsel of a tale. Sure, a little more detail would've been nice, but it was still hot and erotic. Loved it!
5 Stars. Keep writing! :)
I liked it just needed little more info. If there is a part two please give little more info.
Thanks. Keep up good work.
Well thanks for the comment..there is a part 2 with all the back story but please don't trouble urself reading it since u found this offering so paltry..i wouldn't what to offend ur delicate sensibilities again..
So they knew each other how long ago? What do they look like other than chisled, hazel eyes, and 44DD? The story isn't a story, it's an idea. There's nothing to suggest why this is interracial (or any category for that matter). There's no meat to it, nothing of substance, just a meaningless setting with very little context. Were you in a rush to put this up for reading? This isn't even a chapter, it's barely a preface. 2 stars: 1 for the idea and 1 for the balls to post.