All Comments on 'A Long Walk Home Ch. 09'

Your characters are described so well in every one of your stories, but Freya is one of my favorites. Her story is so touching and makes me cry every time I read it.

Keep on writing. Your very talented!

LadyTiger

Freya rocks! Dayton too!

damn...five

"Nors had built the place almost a thousand years ago. They had lived there together for a few centuries before he had become bored with it and moved back down into the city."

If you ever intend to publish this story I think it would be best to remove this paragraph. Because as I understand the story takes place in USA. One thousand years ago north america wasn`t even colonized let alone have cites. So either both Nors and Freia are native americans or this is a nonsense.

Seriously, he is at least 71 years old, likely older. Yet he sounds like a stupid, selfish child.

I really wish you had put more thought into this character.

Hey anonymous if you been reading any of the stories. You would know Dayton is at least 200 years old, Lost his mate 53 years ago and has not recovered from it. The one person he hates most in the world just saved his life of course he's going to act childish and not like himself. next time you decide to scrutinize somebody's characters why don't you read everything first. - April M

@ Muadib89: There is a reason that her name is Freya and her brother is Noes Ericsson. They have Viking heritage. And it is very possible that they could have been in North America 1000 yrs ago or so.

http://www.history.com/news/the-viking-explorer-who-beat-columbus-to-america

I love this series of stories. I find it well written, with only a few spelling and grammatical errors. It's creative and entertaining and I am glad to see it is being published.

this is fiction! why ridicule this story, unless you actually believe in vampires and werewolves