by 8thWunder
Please continue with this story I'm loving the characters great writing looking forward to the next chapter
Great writing, very interesting story plot, and intriguing mystery.
Looking forward to the next chapters !!
DV19
I love this story, great twist, excellent writing.
Please post more.
Jim
This story could really go on, if you were so inclined. If this is just your 1st posting, we’ll bring it on. Excellent job, great ending. Would love to read more. Thank you for a great story!
Great story. We need more. Great characters. Well done. Made me hard and made me think.
Loved the story. I would love to see more. This has a series written all over it!!!
I really loved this stories and think you could make a series of it can't wait to read more if you do
A very pleasent read , I was always told , it is not the dead you have to fear but the living . I have no idea how this story will turn out but I can't wait for more
Terrific story! Loved that it had a great plot along with the hot sex. Please write more chapters!
Bravo Author! I'm so pleased to find a voice as unique as yours here. Please keep writing these, I don't know, "spectral" pieces. They're all great, really great. Your fan - Dan
Thanks for bringing the story to life! Heartbreak, young love and a bit of an adventure leading to hidden jewels leads to new beginnings! Well done!
If this is your first writing, you must continue! Very well done, I can sympathize with Marc, so please continue. You can’t leave it there…