All Comments on 'A Long Weekend Pt. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Jealousy

You need write more and make it obvious how jealous Steve is about Ben. Especially since they agreed to do it in front of each other not behind closed doors where they couldn't look out for each other.

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