All Comments on 'A Look Says It All'

by pocketmw

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ErrantCharmErrantCharmover 12 years ago
Excellent

Very well written story, on all fronts. Your flow felt almost too easy or something. And your ending was nothing short of champion. I loved it. Yeah, a real pleasure to read, this one was. Am definitely looking forward to reading more of your work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

This was a perfect story of lovemaking if only porn would show this to men they would know what real sex is like

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Very Hot

It almost felt like I was reading about how my lover and I make love. Nicely and descriptively written. Look forward to reading more of your stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Nice!

Damn, that made me hot! Excellent job, this story is one of my favorites!

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