All Comments on 'A Loss of Innocence'

This was very beautiful and touching and well-written. Thanks so much.

Your story is so amazingly beautiful and, I have to tell you, that I couldn't help putting myself in it. The similarities were all there as I too am a beautiful redhead with large natural breasts. I couldn't help being pulled in, and to your credit, this is the first time I felt so emotional about a story. I can't wait to see what you may have in store for us next.

Your Loving Reader,

Becca :)

I think it's great when people can share part of their reality as you have; especially when it encompasses the erotic side. I loved reading it - & admire you for writing it. Well done!

Your story was delightful and well writen. Thank you for sharing it. I, too, had my first lesbian experience with a beautiful African American woman and I, too, shared it here at Literotica (My Sexy Roommate). And your home sounds like a wonderful place. I think I'm a little jealous.

Susan James

I agree with Anon who said "loved it". It also has a ring of truth so if it is fiction it is even more spectacular.

More Pls.

beautiful story, beautifully written...loved it

Fantastic story, very well written.

I am a mere male in a male body but a female inside ,though that story is 10 years old it sells on the sensuousness of the 2 people involved thank you ...

Wow, what a great story! It was both beautiful and wonderfully erotic at the same time. Thank you for sharing it with us!

Such a lovely story, defiantly deserves a 5*

Beautiful and sensual story.