by melanie59
I enjoyed your story and your characters. You have an ability to make your situations ring true. I write stories here too--check under my name if you're interested.
Great story so far and definitely different than most of the works that I have been reading lately. Hope the 2nd Chapter is as good as the first and I can't wait to find out what these two find to do.! Thx. JAG/TSO
I really like what you have done with this piece. Writing and plot are well done in my opinion. Waiting for what's next.
I like teacher-student stories, and this one started with a BANG. Very well written with sweet, tender touch. I liked it very much. Thank you for taking the time to write and for sharing this wonderful story. Looking forward for MORE.
Nice start to an erotic story that reminds me of the fantasies I used to have as a teen-ager when I had a beautiful teacher. I was never as lucky as this teenager though.
the Ct. Yankee
I love the rural setting of your story and the events are progressing smoothly. I hope that your characters eventually remain nude at the cabin, while swimming and walking the trails. I'm looking forward to the next chapters.
RecHiker
I love the rural setting of your story and the events are progressing smoothly. I hope that your characters eventually remain nude at the cabin, while swimming and walking the trails. I'm looking forward to the next chapters.
RecHiker