All Comments on 'A Lot More in Common'

by melanie59

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lesliejoneslesliejonesover 14 years ago
Enjoyed your story

I enjoyed your story and your characters. You have an ability to make your situations ring true. I write stories here too--check under my name if you're interested.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Youngagain*

Great story so far and definitely different than most of the works that I have been reading lately. Hope the 2nd Chapter is as good as the first and I can't wait to find out what these two find to do.! Thx. JAG/TSO

AzPilotAzPilotover 14 years ago
Very good work.

I really like what you have done with this piece. Writing and plot are well done in my opinion. Waiting for what's next.

KOTKKOTKover 14 years ago
Wonderful Start

I like teacher-student stories, and this one started with a BANG. Very well written with sweet, tender touch. I liked it very much. Thank you for taking the time to write and for sharing this wonderful story. Looking forward for MORE.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Nice erotic teen-agers dream

Nice start to an erotic story that reminds me of the fantasies I used to have as a teen-ager when I had a beautiful teacher. I was never as lucky as this teenager though.

the Ct. Yankee

RecHikerRecHikerover 14 years ago
Great Start....

I love the rural setting of your story and the events are progressing smoothly. I hope that your characters eventually remain nude at the cabin, while swimming and walking the trails. I'm looking forward to the next chapters.

RecHiker

RecHikerRecHikerover 14 years ago
Great Start....

I love the rural setting of your story and the events are progressing smoothly. I hope that your characters eventually remain nude at the cabin, while swimming and walking the trails. I'm looking forward to the next chapters.

RecHiker

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Very hot build up! I hope there is more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Please continue

Please continue the story.

Anonymous
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