All Comments on 'A Love Spell is in the Air'

I've put this series into my favourites but , I've given it 4/5 everytime . Because Camille does great work but still there are some things which make me hate her .

(Copy-pasting the wish here which I asked the author in the end -)

I hope that if the author wanted to make a new chapter about Camille , they atleast put some details about the girl as well , I mean whether she loves that male or not)

If anybody wanna know what read till the end from here on but it might be boring to you and there are some spoilers as well of this story and the previous one-

I love the exotic dancer hypnosis and icing on the cake is that she does a lot of wholesome things with it , the best thing was she did in the party. I mean yeah she is inclined towards more of a soft Femdom part but I am ok with it like if I put myself into the male shoes who's getting hypnotised like that Auggie boy. June was in love with him and so was he [as Camille's love spell enable the listener to only see the one you love {I still am pretty doubtful about it , I mean she did all those things mainly to help June ( probably because she found herself in June and maybe Keith was the person she collided with at that party when things didn't work out with him) , so maybe she programmed something else for the boys , I mean the author was narrating the story with June' s point of view for sometime, but let's think it didn't and Auggie was in move with her too }] , so even if June reprogrammed his mind ( with her soft whispers and commands at that time ), it wouldn't be too bad as she was really inove with him so she wouldn't do something bad with him and he also wanted to be hers as well ( also Camille kind of ordered her to be his too ) . But if we consider about pennie and Izzy ( of previous story) , we don't know about much about them , I mean Camille only told that they are nice and that's why she literally reprogrammed Ryan's whole mind to be enslaved for her , I mean we aren't provided much details about her , so we can't gauge much about her love , that's why I am afraid that she might use him as her slave or something , even if she loved him , we know nothing about her personality, maybe that love wasn't much or was only for show . We don't know as we aren't provided much information about her . And now penny , the way she talks , I don't know why but it looks like she consider Trent like a play thing , I mean there isn't a literal proof of it but it's just my opinion about her . As a submissive, I would have no any problem to be like a fu***ng slave if I know that my master , loves me too , more than anything and cares about me more than anything. She trusts my decision as well and wouldn't do anything wrong with me . I hope that if the author wanted to make a new chapter about Camille , they atleast put some details about the girl as well , I mean whether she loves that male or not

Well I wanted to add something now when i re read the story , I found that the thing which she did in previous part was nothing wrong, she didn't enslave him just refrained him from cheating so last one was awesom but I can't delete or edit my previous comment now , so sorry for my mistakes