All Comments on 'A Love Story: Mia and Oman'

Awesome as always...can't wait till the next story in the series.

I liked Oman with Emily, but Mia was better. You are a gifted writer. I eagerly await the next story.

Please, write another. I want to learn about her sister.

Who wrote, whoops edited this one for you?

Be honest you aren't writing all this. Your style is all over the map, and I know for a fact what your writing really looks like.

You should be,ashmed

Read the story.

Read not to be critical of style, grammar, typos, etc.

Thanks!

Alan

Awesome as usual!!! You have yet again why you are one my authors here on Literotica. It's fairly short list btw. Keep 'em coming and I for one will keep reading them. Thanks

Please ignore the anonymous moron who keeps accusing you of plagarism. It is obvious he has severe mental problems.

I enjoyed the story, but I really had to concentrate to keep some of your characters straight (i.e.: Bria/Brea). Might I suggest you find an editor/proofreader to help.

I gave this one 4 stars, because of the confusion I saw with the names of the characters.

Keep writing, I like your story lines.

wonderful thank you

Stephen J

Why did you end the story before Mia sister is rescued and to Mia. It was a great 5+++ story until the end and then you shit on yourself, I strongly suggest you add a chapter or probably two and quit with the asinine dramatics!!!

The many mistakes are so distracting- Bria/Brea, Mia/Moa, “Ja’Mal, it’s so magnificent “, no, it was Oman in that scene.