All Comments on 'A Loving Wife's Story Ch. 10'

...it doesn´t happen often that I´m anxiously waiting for the next part.

After eight chapters I still love the writing and the story, like others cannot wait for further chapters, please continue

"If he was good to his wife, he would be good to me."

Yes he's so good to his wife he screws around with other women while he's away from home!

A trifle disconcerting ha she is seducing a married man; but he's always free to say no and if he ruins his marriage, thats his problem.

this is a perfect example of the mind being the biggest organ involved in any sexual happenings. for differing reasons both the characters in your story are using their minds together to build excitement, mental foreplay of sorts. I'm loving the story and the way its being presented and allowed to build slowly. thanks for writing and sharing.

I will reserve a final opinion on this until it's finished . Its eirther very good or very strange but the writing style and structure is of a high quality that is hiding the narrative from my consciousness.

and now we dive into cuckdom. No, too strong, let's say hotwifing. Cant wait to hear how he feels after the deed is done, and how Sondra keeps from falling a bit in love given the new relationship energy these type trists provide.

call no need or desire from this from Jamie for sure no benefit to himI

This story seems to be heading towards a mundane conclusion.

I was hoping that, since this was supposed to be a psychological study, that we'd be getting an insight into how an otherwise unimaginative person (Sondra in particular) comes to realize she has a sexual fantasy outside the limits of a conventional upbringing, and tries to deal with the shock and sense of guilt. This would at least give the florid prose a function within the narrative. The God worship for her husband is a rebound, a way to deal with the awareness that she wants to fuck another man.

A realization of a deeper conflict would make this interesting. A sweet-faced ending provides no reason for and gives no function to, the prose style. It ends up being only an affectation of the author. The reader is left to tolerate it, or not.

What a long introduction into making your husband a chuck. Divorce the bitch, marriage over end of story.

" it was about the same time you told me about Dennis. I want to be honest with you, I have fallen in love. I love you equally. She is younger, tighter, and her smile lights my day like no one ever has. Something new for our toy box. "

We have only one side of this story. I would have liked to have had

both sides of this couples thoughts. What is the husband really thinking.

With just the wife's thoughts it makes her look very selfish and controlling

and she may be that, but why has Jamie let this go so far. Probably too

late for the author to give us more insight into Jamie. 33B8

After this chapter, those commenter’s who still see Sondra as a selfish manipulating bitch makes me wonder if we are reading the same story. What other wording, syntax, exposition, dialogue would make it any clearer that this husband and wife are in complete sharing of this strange adventure, and have been from the first sentence of chapter 1?

The problem of course is many readers cannot put aside their own personal situations and history from the entrancing narrative. My wife is sexual and intelligent, but she is not at the level of this Sondra. Would it scare the hell out of me if she was? Sondra goes where Angles fear to tread, but she is still pragmatic and sensible. And the more sensible and pragmatic she is, the more some commenters see her as a skillful, controlling, manipulating Jezebel. I see all in this story as perfectly believable and realistic for THEM, if not for me. Not yet.

It is also interesting that the burn the bitch brigade are left holding on to their sacred labels for dear life. “Chucky” gives comic relief to their mission

Sorry, I still think it is more for her then for them.....Jamie is going along with it and enjoys some of the thrill, but she continues to be the force behind it all, and frankly she continues to be manipulating the whole situation without regard to possible consequences....she see's the thrill, but not the danger. She refused to really consider that Jamie is not as totally committed to the affair as she is, because to acknowledge that she would have to slow down or stop...A great story very well written with hidden depths, but it never addresses the possible negative impact on Jamie or the marriage.

This tale is very well written, and is keeping my interest due to the construction of the story, and the character development (Mostly Sondra's.) The so called arousal that Jamie experiences when presented with the thought of Sondra being fucked by someone else is not a romantic response, not an erotic response, and not a love response. It's a primal biological response, very well known to councilors and psychologists. It's a primal response, and a very strong response in many men. The oldest tactic in the arsenal of a wife who intends to cuckold her husband is to get her hand on his penis and then talk of being fucked by another man. And then tell the husband she is doing him a favor, it's all because she loves him and adores him that she's fucking another man. If the groundwork is laid slowly, the husband will sometimes go along with it. To each his own, if this turns them on, I couldn't care less. I have said previously that this story reads like a case study of manipulation. This "Cuckold Grooming" is the manipulation that I was referring to. Sondra's mention of the Red Rooster Inn was the beginning of this grooming. She probably knew before she mentioned it full well where she intended to take it. In this scenario, there will be no turning of the tables by Jamie announcing that he has met someone who's interesting. Sondra could demonstrate that she isn't aroused by Jamie fucking around. That will never be part of the equation. In Sondra's character development, it is clear that she intended to fuck someone else. It took 10 chapters for Jamie to give full consent. This story reads more like a narrative manual to cuckolding and grooming a husband than it does a case study into their sexuality. Who knows, other than diagones, if this will progress to Jamie eating the creampie left in his wife by Dennis, or someone else, but it's a real possibility. All for Jamie's enjoyment. How generous of, loving and caring of Sondra. Showing Jamie how much she loves him. To each his and her own, I couldn't care less if they both agree. But in this story, Jamie is definitely being groomed. Sondra says that Dennis will be a short, term or one time thing. But she's observing Dennis to see if he treats his wife well, so I guess treating her well short term is important to her. Not sure if he does treat his wife well, BTW, but maybe he does. We don't know if Dennis' wife wants him fucking around, or if he's just going to try to be sneaky. If he's going to be sneaky, all of Sondra's honesty and caring and loving has flown out the window. She just wants to fuck regardless of who it might hurt. Jamie is being driven by a primal instinct, and Sondra is no doubt very aroused by manipulating the instinct. She wouldn't get the same kick out of fucking around if she was single. So, the dance continues. Hopefully, she doesn't wake up other primal instincts in Jamie that are very closely related to the arousal instinct. He may act very strongly to keep his woman, and she might not like what she has created.

It's still just a wife manipulating her husband. A reluctant husband at that.Hope Jaime can man up.Maybe get his piece on the side.Fair is fair.No?

KEEP IN MIND THAT THERE IS A DIFFERENCE BETWEEN A FANTASY AND REALITY. YOU CAN EASILY DESTROY THIS ENTIRE STORY.

I agree whole heartedly with your comments. Others following the feedback know I am not part of the "burn the bitch" brigade. This is literature, a fantasy, not real live. And a couple of the other "Anon" brigade I agree with. I do anticipate each day's installment and will be sad when it is over, but then we will finally know all, maybe. My thinking is if she goes thru with it and Jaime accepts it, what would keep her from getting an itch in her cunt for another strapping hunk college student? What then?

I came to notice that Jaime's dialog is void of any expression to tell us how he is expressing his comments. Are they dull, monotone, or with the excited inflection that gushes from Sondra's descriptions? Only in the last reply of this chapter that we see Jaime smile. I would have enjoyed seeing more emotion from the husband's perspective as he struggles with his dilemma.

Another thing, at the beginning, a daughter was still at home but not in much. I assume she is off to college now since it has been a year. I would have liked to see her coming walking through and overhearing some of this Victorian romantic prose. How would she have reacted. Yes, it is a psychological study of the husband and wife, but it is still, supposedly, a picture of a normal family in real life.

I have often thought, and shared in comments on stories here, the most intimate acts between man and woman are simple innocuous seeming examples. This chapter exhibits several examples.

A first example: On being ready for a current lover not stories from the past:

"Expanded yours and mine. Enough that we don't need any more rehearsal, I think. I'm ready for the curtain rise and spot lights on. Are you?"

My husband gave me a long pensive look. "I don't know," he finally breathed out. "Maybe. Sort of. Half way I suppose."

Can there be a more intimate situation between husband and wife that discussing the possibility of a lover as real person with real happening and husband giving his totally equivocal response 'Maybe. Sort of. Half way I suppose.'

A second example is the seduction of wife and lover sharing thoughts, ideas: "Done deal then. I will be your away from home diversion, and you will be my away from student and faculty diversion. Mutual benefit. And who knows? Soon we might dare to say many things to each other."

Sharing thoughts, ideas, experiences before sharing a single kiss, before touching fingertips, 'dare to say many things.'

My final example On Holding Hands as Intimacy:

"I was thinking of me. It would take much restraint of me to keep my hands off of you." To prove my point, I reached for his hand and clasped his fingers in mine. Our first touch of skin to skin. The touch was electric. His large hand squeezed my tiny one with understanding and complicity. "This way." I said.

I led him about the market, feeling the heat of our clasped hands flush up my arm and over my chest and down to my groin. Holding hands with a powerfully handsome and sexy man, feeling like a teen back in high school exulting in my discovery of female sexuality, power of attraction, my instinctive wiles to make contact with a boy.

I have commented many times to stories about the intimacy of holding hands. It is a public acknowledgment of connectedness for at the very least the instant moment. A public kiss has a blatancy but holding hands is permitted, acceptable and expresses couple.

Until page two of this chapter Jamie had options, control of a sort. Wife requested, Jamie considered and finally ceded control to her passion and desire.

This chapter is as perfect in its way as was chapter one. Perfect language. Perfect storytelling.

Good job.

Startling news to me, and I re-read some early chapters to see if I had forgot one. Nope. You had another story on your mind. No harm done. A lot of other posters have confused boiler plate LW’s with Sondra and have gone off on tangents, with a chaos of outcomes, plot twists, consequences, and certainties.

Even so, I feel rewarded by the variety of feedback on this series. The praise is flattering. The not so praising sometimes take a turn toward academic essay. That is unusual, and also flattering. And what writer doesn’t lap up flattery.

I’m just tweaking your nose, honey licker. You might or might not be pleased to hear your mistake suddenly became my muse. It turned on a big light bulb of a sudden idea. I’m thinking the ending chapter is not the ending after all. One more is called for. That might appear in a month or so. Writing is work. D.

Isn't Sondra the tragic hero here? Yes, she is manipulative and yes she wants to channel her husband down her chosen path to get to the resulting affair she wants. But I don't see her intent as quite so diabolical as many of the comments would accuse. She sincerely believes (or won't let herself believe otherwise) that the end result really will be for the excitement, closeness and betterment of her and Jamie's marriage. Sure we can all look in from the outside and see what a disaster/cluster this could become, but it is exactly that risk/reality that is the blind spot Sondra won't let herself see. Sondra is just blind to the reality that she is really going after what she wants for herself and justifying it as for her husband and her marriage.

Telling. Your story should be flowing in your mind as inspiration, long before you sit at the keyboard. You can compose while you shop, drive, eat, shower. Agreed the task of converting ideas to written text is work, but labor of love really. I don't particularly like your husband in this story, but that's my problem. If he is eager to be cuckolded, and relishes the idea of reliving the causal event, so be it. My main complaint is that you have taken way too many words to get to this point, in flat predictable fashion.

Diagones, your writing is far better than essay writing. This story matter is not my usual entertainment, but your writing is very captivating and entertaining. This is a fun read. Regardless of the direction that you take it, it will be fun to continue reading it. My earlier analysis is in no way critical of your writing- just speculation, as discussing a movie would be. The story is yours, I'm enjoying it, giving it a high rating, and looking forward to future chapters.

Thanks for the effort and work.

that this is a fantastic discussion and exercise in open thinking. I feel as if I am invested after so many chapters. The admission that Sondra gets something private in the arrangement made the story much more realistic. If she did not admit that it is a terrific thrill for her in addition to giving Jamie a thrill it would be sorta like pissing on me and telling me its raining.

Sondra is honest in her wanting to bring excitement into her marriage. The problem is she is leading and not truly cooperating with her husband in the fullest sense. Instead of guiding him down a road that he is at best reluctant, she should have asked for more input. "What are some of your fantasies Jamie?" would be a nice start. After he almost ashamedly admitted the cuckold fetish, why didn't he ask about a similar situation in which he was the one involved in the fling. Would it turn her on? She did not even offer to let him live out a fantasy. She did not even ask him what are some of your fantasies!

After Dennis will they need more and more stimulus to get off? In the beginning the old pre-marriage fucks were enough to stimulate them, but they eventually proved to be temporary. How can a marriage survive if you have to keep topping yourselves?

In the end its your story. svg1 brought up some fantastic points! But please write it our own way, I am only thinking of a couple of points that interest me. . Thank you!

All the emotions and subtleties along with the daring. I'm going to miss it when it ends!

Jamie what will you do when your wife returns to you, neither of us know how this will hit you in the gut. Suppose it unveils your half is not enough. While your wife has a just fucked look about her, if she comes home that night. So your ok with this you think, she stays over and textes you " see you tomorrow".

Will you get hard, will she need a break, he is a big man, and can we wait another day. Dennis is going home for the weekend and I want to see him first, "you don't mind do you my love".

Jamie Good luck to you. I can't wait to see what's been decidedly one sided.

But oh if it works out well....Amazing.

The thrill of “it’s really going to happen!” is a powerful one. The irrevocable step. It’s all anticipation at this point.

Again what a crock of shit. This so called wife is nothing but a bitch in heat. Tricking her husband into letting her fuck another man and making it seem as if HE will benefit from it as well.

While the story is well written I don't care for the premise. The wife wears the pants in the relationship and the poor husband is trying to hold the tail of a tigress he loves who's schmoozed her way into cuckolding her husband.

The narrowness of my mind is mine.... but I don't understand why any man would want to have his wife have sex with other men. 2 stars