All Comments on 'A Lustful Liaison Ch. 02'

by JSKNIGHT

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Tigr2Tigr2over 7 years ago
Better than Ch 1

You kept the tentative nature of the situation while adding truly erotic contact between the man and each woman individually. Maybe the next chapter has the girls together for the first time!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
more please

i thought it was good

JSKNIGHTJSKNIGHTover 7 years agoAuthor
Thanks for feedback

@Prolonged_Debut10, I don't know what you mean by 'no story.'

Prolonged_Debut10Prolonged_Debut10over 7 years ago
Entertaining

...but that is all. There is no story to go with it.

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