All Comments on 'A Lustful Night In'

Who talks or thinks like that? Unbelievable dialogue and mediocre sex.

Silly and vapid characters. Mediocre at best, by men for men indeed.

Do these women have breasts? There was only pussy licking in this story, and nothing about tittie sucking, a rather important part of girl-on--girl sex.

Thanks to those that have taken the time to comment. Obviously there are some improvements I should make on any future stories, but thanks for reading.

I like the way that this story started. It was a very unique way to lead them into sex. I will agree that I wish there was a little more breast action but I think that it was ok without it. Don't take the other comments too seriously, I have read many stories that were worse than yours.

I thought it was great...the whole point of a story is the fantasy. It made me wet. Gonna go play now

As a bi curious female this Definitely Turned me on.

Lesbians may or may not find the story singularly lacking for them. I'm a guy. I enjoyed it. As fun as was the action side of the story telling, I enjoyed the perspective differentiation, as well. Thank you for sharing.

I'm a bisexual female... I really enjoyed this story made me so wet.. it's time for me to play now ^.^ makes me glad I got my own butt plug and vibrator all I need is the sexy woman ;)

Thank you to those that have left supportive comments. I'm glad you've enjoyed my story and put it to good use. I have been working on some new stories, which I hope to finish up soon.