All Comments on 'A Maggot in My Mind Ch. 01'

This is one of the best mind game stories I have read. It is subtle and well developed. I can't wait for part 2.

Wow! What a great start! I can't wait to read more. Your writing makes me strain for the relief that Sara needs so much. Is her husband a part of this conspiracy? What has led hed maid to be a part of this plot.

I felt sko helpless as I watched Sara's plight. I can't wait for both of us to get some relief!

Please write more soon.

Awesome! Please continue the story! I hope you're just getting started with this one :)

W on't write any more, need to get to next chapter.

Everything in this beginning of a story is well-rounded. This is a very good introduction, as it is enticing, and makes you read only more and more. Well done.

Moonharp

P.S. - the actual writing was very good, as well.