All Comments on 'A Marriage Compromise'

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that was hot

What sicko trash.

After all this is Loving Wives. Good read thanks for sharing.

That was pretty good.

The author(?) can return to the 5th grade classroom.

1*

Okay. I admit that I liked it. Well written. I found it a bit amusing and that ain't a bad thing. Gotta admit the abrupt end was a whole lot like slamming into a wall at 20 or 25 mph. It isn't likely the impact is going to hurt all that much, but it surely will get your attention.

Thanks for the good read.

for writing? 3*

not worth rating

Or medieval? Hot enough, but not much on story line!

2*

is medieval, originally used to describe architecture using pointed rather than round (Norman or Roman) arches.

How about preposterous and unintelligible?

Eyeball, this is something a dysfunctional 7th grade boy would "write". Where do you people dream this chit up? Were you abused as a child and it phucked up your brain???? Why don't you do something productive for society. No wonder America is rotting from the inside out!!!!!!!

To those "vocal" (noteably unnamed and therefore cowardly) readers,

I wish you had liked the story, but there is nothing I can do about it if you don’t. It is part of the risk I take in putting my work out there. I will however not tolerate attacks without any constructiveness. If you don’t like it, rate it and move on. If you have something helpful to say, I’ll hear it (i.e.- the story is set in medieval times. Also it is short as it is an INTERLUDE. See definition).

To the anonymous poster, whom has really taken issue, why did you read it? Loving wives is “Married extra-marital fun: swinging, sharing & more”. What part of that is hard to understand? And for the love of your god if you want to compare my story structure to a seventh grader or whatever, spell your words correctly! It detracts from your argument. Not to mention, this is a PORN site. Nothing about it is realistic! If you are against sex, probably not the best place for you.

Again, if you don’t like it, fine. But remember before you start spewing vitriol, what have YOU written?

No story; just describing some sex. Therefore, 1*.

I ask for a good story and as usual you deliver my dearest Playfulpanthress. Your stories are like a breath of fresh air, this one is no exception. It is well written and the story flows nicely only to end us with the tease at the end. Although nothing will top your Mountain Retreat which is by far, your best work. Again, very well done and I look forward to reading more of your delicious work.

To the anonymous who posted on 9/10/2012, if anything you cannot be talking about ''phucked up'' as your grammar is by far, the only thing I see ''phucked up'' on this page other than your obvious 5th grade level education.

Just a nasty description of sex, with no real story. Author is under the illusion that she had written something worthwhile here, but is so wrong.