All Comments on 'A Match for the el Maiens Ch. 04'

by NaokoSmith

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storyholicstoryholicalmost 6 years ago
Confusing

I am so confused and I don't know what the hell is goinh on, but the dialogue is interesting enough to keep me reading. I just don't know how characters are related to each other. There are all these different tangents being offered up that aren't being pursued in the next chapters. Plus, the names are so long that I keep confusing them.

StrixalucoStrixalucoabout 2 years ago

The problem isn't really names being long, but the people being called by different parts of their names at different times.

It seems in this world there is one feature that existed in real world at least until 18th century: love between friends could be as warm and as openly showed as between lovers. Even so that it is hard to distinguish if letters were written to a friend or a same-sex lover. I find it very charming to have this taken into the story.

I am also quite certain that many of the tangents are pursued later in the story - this is a slow-burner after all, that much is clear.

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