All Comments on 'A Match for the el Maiens Ch. 16'

by NaokoSmith

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MojomaggieMojomaggiealmost 9 years ago
Wonderful.

You really are an amazing writer. If you do not publish this, the angels will weep for you. ; )

NaokoSmithNaokoSmithalmost 9 years agoAuthor
Wow!

Blushing with gratitude here.

Thank you so much!

:) :) :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
turning a corner

This was a great chapter. Great reveal about Arianna's intellectual work. If only these two could see they need each other ... but it seems that is building. Love that they are starting from a new place in their relationship. Great writing.

NaokoSmithNaokoSmithalmost 9 years agoAuthor
Thank you!

That's great - that's how I see this too. Gradually the two of them find out more and more about each other and in this chapter they have finally shown it all. The reveal about Tashka is dramatically exciting, but the reveal of Clair and Arianna to each other is much deeper. Now comes the hard work of acceptance ...

:)

StrixalucoStrixalucoabout 2 years ago

The less secrets, the better marriage, normally.

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