All Comments on 'A Matter of Betrayal Ch. 04'

by AngeloMichael

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Interesting

Why do I get the feeling something really bad is going to happen to Colin, his mom, or Moe and Matt.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
it sad how everything going seth way.

how about the set with colin dumby of ex girlfriend.she didn't know seth was behind the attack.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Very Good

This just keeps getting better and better. I'm looking forward to Seth's demise. I hope Colin is the one to take him down and his girlfriend Sheryl too. Too bad about Sheryl and her new attitude.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
heating up yo'll

didn't really expect this...

thought it was all just about dick and pussy..

at least this one..i will look forward to..

and hey..(make colin slap seth in the end will you?)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Very interesting

Wow, very different. Feels like One Tree Hill or something. But very good.

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57about 10 years ago

Zero sex in this chapter. Just more story development.

Foxterot7aFoxterot7aabout 2 years ago

I like the number of plots the author is developing. Erotic literature does not have to have sex in everything. A thinking person's erotica does not depend on sexual activity. It depends on logical development and appropriate, realistic sexual activity.

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