by OneWhoAdores
Cute little story, making a change from the normal far out tales.
Simple, loving & sweet.
I loved this amusing story, and identified with it completely. Not with the legal stuff, our careers are completely different, but with the gentle and subtle slave/mistress lifestyle, which is so like the relationship I have with my wife.
Like every one of your tales, this one is off the chart. Having practice law for a lifetime, I especially enjoyed your creative use of legal terms and words. Please write something (anything) soon. Your work has real class, hits the mark and is really hot. For your sake, I hope its at least in part biographical. If so, you are one of the few persons with whom I had direct or indirect contact who I actually. envy. In any event, I admire and appreciate your work. Thank you.
Retired Lawyer
Good characters, good plot. Excellent dialogue. Love the word usage, the pseudo legalese woven into the story! J.
Another outstanding story. The sense of romance and genuine love woven through this story makes this an enviable fantasy.
— Me