All Comments on 'A Matter Of Size Ch. 03'

I liked your story, but I sensed English isn't your first language as I read it. I suggest if you want to publish future stories in English you get one of the site editors to give it a once over first. For an amateur writer you show some keen imagination, but make the mistakes all amateurs writers make: too much tell, not enough show; wrong use of tense; and, overuse of passive voice. But don't feel aggrieved by my comments as 99% of the authors on this site do this. They're hard habits to break, but not impossible. Good luck with your future writing.

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It amazes me how guys are turned. I was the same way. When I sucked that cock for the first time, I was hooked. That night I ended up sucking 4 guys. I then was fucked and loved that. I have not been with a woman since then.

What a turnon this story included several of my favorite things. Sucking cock and eating another man's cum from my girlfriend's pussy. I haven't had my ass fucked by another man, but I have been pegged by my gf with her strapon. A party like that would be a dream come true. I loved all three chapters, but the third was by far my favorite.