All Comments on 'A Merry Christmas'

by BeachBaby82

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Sidney43Sidney43over 12 years ago
WOW!

I loved your story. It was well written and full of reality to the point that I wished it was me holding her in that moment of happiness. I suppose it was made more real because of my familiarity with the setting, which gave me the only pause. I find it hard to accept that there was no other traffic on the highway between Seaside and Portland, but then that would have ruined the storyline.

We drove that highway this summer on the way to spending three days in Manzanita. I guess they had towed her car by then.

Five stars for sure.

MizTMizTover 12 years ago
Evening Drive

What a really nice story. If I had a special someone right now I might be temped to drive the Sierra's tonite, storming there already

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Welcome

Thanks. A really nice story, well balanced and fuzzy. Keep them coming.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Sweet story. A bit rushed, but not in a bad way. I love the relaxed and romantic writing style.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

The perfect Christmas story.

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