by TrentEvans
You so cannot leave it like that. More please poor Jacob but very well written... gripping to the end
Wonderfully written for a first story, especially when you don't reveal who is the female "protagonist" Description is vivid. Keep the stories coming. Don't necessarily make this scene into a series.
Unreal, in the best sense of the word.
Original, compassionate, heart-wrenching and filled with hope.
Thank you.