by rnumbers123
give you shit 1star loser wimp author . . another patpathetic writer pathetic story
As invited in your foreword, this is one xylophone who calls you out on your bullshit. This story absolutely sucks.
His wife is so proud of cuckold hubby. He dove right in the deep end and is starting to get hooked on sucking cock and swallowing loads of thick hot fresh seed. In a short time he will get better at sucking cock. Will not be long before wife start using a strap on in cuckold's man pussy. Then her lover can fuck him just like he fucks her. Cannot wait for more of this cuckold's training and fun. She may even put him in chastity.
I love this. My favourite fantasy. I can't believe it doesn't have 4.5+ rating.
Poorly witten.,Formulaic cuckold drivel.Non original garbage The trolls are right in dissing this. Its just plain bad. Sorry author. Cha Cha Cha
This is gay, a man sucking another man cock is gay willing cuckold is fetish, all cucks should kill themselves, rid world of wimpy pathetic men ASAP, read it cuck take knife slit your throat or wrists then your wife or girlfriend can finally be happy with a real men
The request for suicide is the winner so far, but really folks, telling a cuck he's not a man isn't an insult, it's encouragement. 1.97! For every 2 one star, I'm getting a 4 star! Yes! Pile on! Dance trolls dance!
It's also nothing but a string of cliches strung together, absent of all thought or effort.
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My default score when I open a story is 3, average. A story loses points for being unoriginal or being by rote. This is a prime example.
This is sick fetish puke, stay away from children, please.
And humiliation. And demeaning and degrading. Not worth the time spent reading it. And it has nothing to do with the subject matter (cuckaphobes be damned - that's just your excuse). There wasn't an interesting or clever part to it. Terribly written. THAT'S why this is getting bombed.
If anything it is the antithesis of eroticism This was not very good and probably should have stayed in Fetish like the first part
She only wants to turn her husband into a faggot, so she can have her lover and soon ditch the husband...Why would they locked the door, if not for that? This marriage is over...he lost respect for himself, and his wife too...