All Comments on 'A MILF's Marvlous, Meaty Legs Ch. 02'

Adding the themes of dominatrix, sexy MILF, and tempting mother. It will be great to follow the lead with her twin boys, with her being three times older than they.

You had several word problems:

"Christine stopped the jiggling of her calves and smiled at him."

You forgot the name of your main character.

"Carlyne pulled him close for a kiss, leaning against back against her car, "

Leaning against back against doesn't make sense.

Looking forward to following chapters. 5 *'s

The only way it could be hotter is if she was wearing crotch-less pantyhose.

Nothing short of a 5 Star Rating! I notice the name "Christine" in the story. Maybe you missed it when you changed her name. Keep up the great work!!! You should write a book about this material... 50 Inches of Leg =o)