All Comments on 'A Million Dollar Deal Ch. 02'

Getting better, still going to wait to make a final commit.

Could have a nice payday for this virgin. Who was she and not just a virgin ? So far a story that keeps your attention. Wish it hadn't ended before she was busted.

effing brilliant. The way you've written this is definitely First Time. and quite intense.

I particularly like the way you show us some of how different characters are responding to what's happening. I really expected to hear more or see more from Monica, but this set of scenes was quite well done.

Thanks.