All Comments on 'A Million Dollar Deal Ch. 03'

This story is well constructed, powerfully written and completely logical. I felt myself compelled to read to the end and felt great respect and sympathy for the young lady discovering such an intense sexual education, even though she was prompted to participate for money. I would recommend this story to all erotic readers.

Alison B

I agree completely with the previous comment. I particularly liked that you did not feel compelled, as so many authors seem to be, to make Kitten enjoy anal sex. I think it added very much to the realism that she disliked what I feel is very much a minority pleasure.

I liked the story a lot, it seemed really well thought out and well presented.

I have had this desire myself and will one day act on this, virgins are impossible to find of legal age.

I only wish that Monica had got more involved in loving her as well, but I guess if she had, I would have scored this a 5 being perfect.

Look forward to reading more of you work, and keep on doing what you do.

Moca

it needs a sequel have dennis and her hook up

This was a great story. you should have something where her and Dennis get together.

A true girls fantasy, my hands are working overtime, being a virgin myself, wow, what an introduction.

Jo

I quite enjoyed the series, but the last chapter seemed to be a little over-the-top. But, then again, I'm not really one for the whole domination thing.

This was a great story! Everything was perfect. From the characters to the story. I would love to see another story continue on from this point with Katie and Dennis. This has become definitely one of my favorites to date on this site!

Thank you!

I laughed out loud at the "calling her a slut" rebuke and "being polite" while being whored out part. It set the narrative up in a less cliched manner from most other stories. Well done!

The story is far-fetched - but who cares? Great details, excellent discriptions...very sexy.

I loved every minute of reading this, it really got me going!!

xx

Fantastic story, a great description of a very beautiful, sexy,and sensual woman.

Love the way you described how she was wearing her sexy panties and bra and how she was stripped out of her dress.

It was great that she was able to cum most ever time she was fucked even while she was ass fucked.

I do wish you would have added that she got her money and how she spent it.

Reminds me of the joke 'the snotty bitch got offered a million to have sex all night and after agreeing was offered a thousand for a quickie. When she asked what kind of girl do you think I am? she was told, we know what kind of girl you are- now we're haggling over the price'

Well written story although the first paragraph stuffed up spelling and grammar.

but how boring would a story about the mundane be? There are super rich folk willing to fund the fulfillment of elaborate fantasies just are there are a near infinite number of sexually maturing females for whom a million dollars would be life altering and would accept the money. Her reasoning leading up to her decision was flawless and I see absolutely nothing "far fetched" and I would further submit that if you were to make the same offer to the entire universe of very attractive virgins you'd get far, far more acceptances than rejections.

Virginity is only a little prick away from being gone. This story was a true statement to that fact. Enjoyed the way you ended this story - or is this the end ?