All Comments on 'A MIL's Care Ch. 02'

I'd like to see how this progresses. Waiting for the next chapter.

Enjoyed this story (so far) & I am looking forward to the next installment. I hope & suggest that the wife join in on the fun! 😊😜

I really enjoyed this; a valuable starting point for some great D/s stories.

But, PLEASE, get yourself an editor, maybe one of the Lit volunteer editing team. There were so many spelling and grammatical errors that they took some of the gloss off your story. Reading over, past and through those errors, it's still a good story and well worth reading.

Great story... part 3? Where is it ....

Love to read part 3

where is part 3

Hasn't it been long enough? Where are the rest of the parts to this? Set up for possibly quite a bit more has been nicely done. It would be such a shame to not finish what you've only just started.

Can’t wait for part 3,4,5,6,7. Save the ink and paper…