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jthserrajthserraabout 20 years ago
An interesting beginning

to the story... I will have to read on. I liked the style, and aside from a couple of typos found the execution flawless. I like the development of characters, but look forward to seeing more.

Overall,

Excellent story.

jim :)

kingquibkingquibover 18 years ago
reminds me

I think your story is leading somewhere good, better than most of what's on Literotica. It reminds me of a story I wrote, which also opens up in a Sanitarium. Sanitariums are small worlds for horror writers.

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Apparently, I can't count. As of now, it's almost 8 years happily married. As for something from me, writing wise. That's still up in the air, floating about. Perhaps it always will be. Every time I try and get back into it. It fails, I wander off, I do other things. Perhap...

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