All Comments on 'A Mob Stepmom'

TO short but not bad.

A twist to incest.

Caught me by surprise, the author usually has a much higher angst quotient to his tales. The utilitarian spin is still in play, but as long as he keeps bringing the heat and keeps moving the story forward, there's minimal cause for concern or complaint.

I thank the author for sharing.

And I don't think it works as well as many of your other stories. I applaud the effort, though. I prefer your "Mom's the Boss, do what I tell you and keep me cumming" stories.

Still 4* for the effort, thanks!

Wasn't like your other stories. *

A little short

I can see this could be all there is but this could also be just the start of a long story, how about him being an undercover F.B.I. agent and they bring down a whole load of crims. So many possible things could follow this story. I just wish I could write.

I liked the story. Thanks for sharing 👍.

the usual, of course, but with humor and real sweetness. a very delightful and romantic twist. reminded my of dashiell hammett, actually.

It was great but where is the rest of the story?